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Which position do YOU think I would be best for??
Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
The Basics
Name: Meadow Eclipse (goes by Eclipse the Determined of just Eclipse)
Gender: Female
Age: roughly 2 years
Place Of Birth: a field somewhere down south....
Place Of Allegiance: Aver Valley
Position: Hunter
Appearance
Coat Color: Black, gray, and bloodred
Fur Length: medium-long
Fur Markings and Scars: bloodred streake along flanks, back, and tail; right ear torn and right eye scratched.
Eye Color: meadow green
Physical Build: small and light, yet strong.
Persona
History: unknown
Personality: quiet, yet determined/fierce
Strengths: healing, agility
Weaknesses: climbing, swimming
Likes: sunlight, pranking
Dislikes: talking
Fears: Losing her best friend Aaka
Relationships
Crush: N/A
Mate: N/A
Pups: N/A
Friends: N/A
Foes: N/A
Family: Mother deceased; father's whereabouts unknown
~Eclipse the Silent
Name: Meadow Eclipse (goes by Eclipse the Determined of just Eclipse)
Gender: Female
Age: roughly 2 years
Place Of Birth: a field somewhere down south....
Place Of Allegiance: Aver Valley
Position: Hunter
Appearance
Coat Color: Black, gray, and bloodred
Fur Length: medium-long
Fur Markings and Scars: bloodred streake along flanks, back, and tail; right ear torn and right eye scratched.
Eye Color: meadow green
Physical Build: small and light, yet strong.
Persona
History: unknown
Personality: quiet, yet determined/fierce
Strengths: healing, agility
Weaknesses: climbing, swimming
Likes: sunlight, pranking
Dislikes: talking
Fears: Losing her best friend Aaka
Relationships
Crush: N/A
Mate: N/A
Pups: N/A
Friends: N/A
Foes: N/A
Family: Mother deceased; father's whereabouts unknown
~Eclipse the Silent
Last edited by Lark on Sat May 10, 2014 12:58 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : marked as inactive)
Eclipse- Posts : 66
Join date : 2014-01-16
Location : Aver Valley, and I love it!!! :)
Characters
Primary Character: Eclipse the Determined: Hunter of Aver Valley
Secondary Character:
Tertiary Character:
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
Could you fill out the bio template, please? It would make your character more detailed and make it easier to read.
(Also, it's more proper to refer to your character in third person, rather than in first. So instead of saying "I so-and-so" you would say "Eclipse so-and-so".)
(Also, it's more proper to refer to your character in third person, rather than in first. So instead of saying "I so-and-so" you would say "Eclipse so-and-so".)
Lark- Senior Marshall Grand Alpha Major
- Posts : 2031
Join date : 2012-07-20
Location : Right here in the West Lands, and loving it every day.
Characters
Primary Character: Lark, Alpha of the Aver Valley
Secondary Character: Lokero, Wanderer
Tertiary Character: Rolenn, Scout of the Krinex Mountains
ok
Sure thing! I will as soon as i get more time!
Eclipse- Posts : 66
Join date : 2014-01-16
Location : Aver Valley, and I love it!!! :)
Characters
Primary Character: Eclipse the Determined: Hunter of Aver Valley
Secondary Character:
Tertiary Character:
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
It's recently been brought to my attention that there is already a character with the title "the Silent". Can you pick another title for your character?
Lark- Senior Marshall Grand Alpha Major
- Posts : 2031
Join date : 2012-07-20
Location : Right here in the West Lands, and loving it every day.
Characters
Primary Character: Lark, Alpha of the Aver Valley
Secondary Character: Lokero, Wanderer
Tertiary Character: Rolenn, Scout of the Krinex Mountains
Re: pick another title
Ok, let's see....
How about Eclipse the Meek or Eclipse the Determined???
(personally, i like the second one!!!)
~Eclipse
How about Eclipse the Meek or Eclipse the Determined???
(personally, i like the second one!!!)
~Eclipse
Eclipse- Posts : 66
Join date : 2014-01-16
Location : Aver Valley, and I love it!!! :)
Characters
Primary Character: Eclipse the Determined: Hunter of Aver Valley
Secondary Character:
Tertiary Character:
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
Whichever you like is fine. Edit whichever one you want into your bio, please^^
Lark- Senior Marshall Grand Alpha Major
- Posts : 2031
Join date : 2012-07-20
Location : Right here in the West Lands, and loving it every day.
Characters
Primary Character: Lark, Alpha of the Aver Valley
Secondary Character: Lokero, Wanderer
Tertiary Character: Rolenn, Scout of the Krinex Mountains
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
Okay, all set!!! Thanks!
~Eclipse
~Eclipse
Eclipse- Posts : 66
Join date : 2014-01-16
Location : Aver Valley, and I love it!!! :)
Characters
Primary Character: Eclipse the Determined: Hunter of Aver Valley
Secondary Character:
Tertiary Character:
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
I think you should be a hunter, personally.
We're kind of lacking those in Aver Valley, and there's a chance that Aaka(My first charrie x33) and Meadow would become wonderfully close ^^
It just seems to fit well, though Healer would probably be sufficient as well. However, we already have two of those so...
I think Hunter.
And also... I was wondering if you would fill out some of areas more thoroughly. The 'Fear' category should definitely be filled; Your wolf must have some deep, hidden fear or another. It doesn't have to be horribly dramatic or anything. It could be owls or something haha c:
And finally.. Welcome to Wolves of the West Lands!
We're kind of lacking those in Aver Valley, and there's a chance that Aaka(My first charrie x33) and Meadow would become wonderfully close ^^
It just seems to fit well, though Healer would probably be sufficient as well. However, we already have two of those so...
I think Hunter.
And also... I was wondering if you would fill out some of areas more thoroughly. The 'Fear' category should definitely be filled; Your wolf must have some deep, hidden fear or another. It doesn't have to be horribly dramatic or anything. It could be owls or something haha c:
And finally.. Welcome to Wolves of the West Lands!
Aaka- Posts : 1174
Join date : 2012-08-25
Location : Where there's forests and lots of snow<3
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Primary Character: Aaka
Secondary Character: Katoa
Tertiary Character: Sasha
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
Thanks for that!! But I think Lark might get upset, because she changed me from healer to warrior already, so... but if u really think so, u can suggest that to her...
i think my fear will be losing my best friend Aaka cuz thats sad...
thnks
~Eclipse
i think my fear will be losing my best friend Aaka cuz thats sad...
thnks
~Eclipse
Eclipse- Posts : 66
Join date : 2014-01-16
Location : Aver Valley, and I love it!!! :)
Characters
Primary Character: Eclipse the Determined: Hunter of Aver Valley
Secondary Character:
Tertiary Character:
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
If you want me to change you to hunter, let me know. There are a lot of warriors anyway. ^^
Lark- Senior Marshall Grand Alpha Major
- Posts : 2031
Join date : 2012-07-20
Location : Right here in the West Lands, and loving it every day.
Characters
Primary Character: Lark, Alpha of the Aver Valley
Secondary Character: Lokero, Wanderer
Tertiary Character: Rolenn, Scout of the Krinex Mountains
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
Yes, please... sorry! Please feel free to put me wherever i am needed most!
~Eclipse
~Eclipse
Eclipse- Posts : 66
Join date : 2014-01-16
Location : Aver Valley, and I love it!!! :)
Characters
Primary Character: Eclipse the Determined: Hunter of Aver Valley
Secondary Character:
Tertiary Character:
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
Wherever you want to be is fine. ^^
Lark- Senior Marshall Grand Alpha Major
- Posts : 2031
Join date : 2012-07-20
Location : Right here in the West Lands, and loving it every day.
Characters
Primary Character: Lark, Alpha of the Aver Valley
Secondary Character: Lokero, Wanderer
Tertiary Character: Rolenn, Scout of the Krinex Mountains
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
I'd like to be a hunter, please...
Eclipse- Posts : 66
Join date : 2014-01-16
Location : Aver Valley, and I love it!!! :)
Characters
Primary Character: Eclipse the Determined: Hunter of Aver Valley
Secondary Character:
Tertiary Character:
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
Done. You now have the added bonus of being able to stop us from counting to 40. :p
Lark- Senior Marshall Grand Alpha Major
- Posts : 2031
Join date : 2012-07-20
Location : Right here in the West Lands, and loving it every day.
Characters
Primary Character: Lark, Alpha of the Aver Valley
Secondary Character: Lokero, Wanderer
Tertiary Character: Rolenn, Scout of the Krinex Mountains
Re: Eclipse the Determined {INACTIVE}
I will try to remember that!!
~Eclipse
~Eclipse
Eclipse- Posts : 66
Join date : 2014-01-16
Location : Aver Valley, and I love it!!! :)
Characters
Primary Character: Eclipse the Determined: Hunter of Aver Valley
Secondary Character:
Tertiary Character:
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